Recommendations, please

I have an idea for a new series bouncing around in my brain.  It’s still in the earliest stages of life, so I can’t go into much detail about it right now.  It will, however, be something of a change for me since it will be science fiction rather than fantasy.  However, since I have more than enough Ptahmose-related stuff on my plate at the moment, it’s going to be a while before I devote any serious effort to this new project.

In the meantime, however, I’d like to broaden my exposure to sci fi.  So far, my experience of the genre has been confined to The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (plus some of its sequels) and several books set in the Star Wars expanded universe.  But I was hoping that you, dear readers, might be able to recommend some good reads.  So if you have any recommendations, please leave them in the comments!

Truth in fiction

I was rudely awakened this morning by the fire alarm.  As I waited outside for the all clear to return to my cozy bed, I decided to download a sample of Wilbur Smith’s Warlock on my iPhone.   Warlock is a fantasy novel set in ancient Egypt and I had been meaning to check it out for some time, but I never managed to get around to it until now.

By the end of the first page, it became apparent that artistic license was going to be the order of the day.   I had hoped that Warlock would be a work of historical fantasy on par with Susanna Clarke’s Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell, but Smith took so many liberties with the past that it had a negative impact on my ability to enjoy the story.

Now I get the fact that this is a novel and not a history textbook.  I also understand that artistic license is often necessary.  But if you’re going to set your work in a real-world society, I think you have to adhere to a certain basic standard of authenticity.  Populating your version of ancient Egypt with people named “Lostris” and “Memnon” is like writing a story about feudal Japan with characters named “Tiffany” and “Bartholomew.”  If you’re going to fudge that many details, why not just go all the way and set your story in a wholly fictional world of your own creation?

Let me make one thing clear, though: I’m not saying that Warlock is a bad book because it lacks authenticity.  It’s just not the sort of book I want to read.   I think I’ll download something by C. J. Sansom instead…

Revisions, revisions

I’ll be honest: revising a novel after a beta read is probably my least favorite part of the writing process.  Compared to the adventure of coming up with a plot and writing the first draft, post-beta revisions tend to be something of a chore.  By that point, you have your plot and your characters pretty well nailed down, so most the changes you’re making are mundane tweaks and typo-fixes.  And, vital as they may be, it’s hard to get fired up about moving commas and adding dialogue tags.  True, you do get to write the occasional new scene, but such creative bursts are usually few and far between at this late stage.

I think I may have figured out a way to make the revision process a little bit less of a hassle though.  Since most of my beta readers made their comments using Word’s track changes feature, it occurred to me that I could merge all their changes into one master document.  This makes things a lot tidier since you don’t have to have a gazillion documents open at once.  Also, since Word allows synchronous scrolling when you’re viewing two documents side-by-side, it’s easy to keep track of the line-by-line comments.

Some of my beta readers made their comments in a separate document instead of using the track changes feature and I ended up having to go through and add them to the master list manually.  For simplicity’s sake, I think that from now on I’m going to request that everyone make their comments alongside the text itself.

Now that everything is set up, I’m cautiously optimistic that I’ll be able to move quickly through the revisions.  With any luck, they’ll be done within a week to ten days.  Then I will probably have a very limited gamma read, largely for the purpose of hunting down the last remaining typos.  Once that’s done, it will be time to declare the writing process finished and start sending out query letters.

Diablo 3 beta news!

Blizzard president Mike Morhaime announced today during a conference call with investors that internal testing on Diablo 3 has begun and the team hopes to begin the beta test at some point during the third quarter (i.e. between July 1 and September 30).  He also made it clear that a 2011 release is still on the table, much to my delight.

Of course this all needs to be taken with a grain of salt.  This is Blizzard, after all, and they’re not afraid to miss deadlines if they think a game needs more polishing.  But I’m going to play the optimist and assume that we’re finally entering the home stretch after years and years of waiting.

Now the question I have to ask myself is whether or not I want to try to participate in the beta.  On the one hand, I’d love to get my hands on D3 as soon as possible, but on the other hand, I kinda feel like seeing the beta version of the game would ruin some of the magic.  Yeah, I know, I’m weird. 😛

A nice day for a white wedding

Anglophile that I am, I joined 2 billion other people in watching the wedding of Prince William (now the Duke of Cambridge) and Catherine Middleton last Friday.  It was, of course, a splendid affair that showed British pomp and circumstance at its best.  The service was wonderful and a number of the hymns chosen by the royal couple were favorites of mine (in particular “Guide me thou, O Great Redeemer” and “I Was Glad”).  I also have to give them a lot of credit for using the Series One marriage rite from Common Worship rather than the abysmal modern language rite with its cringeworthy talk of “the delight and tenderness of sexual union.”

Last Friday’s wedding demonstrated that the Monarchy can adapt to changing circumstances while still remaining grounded in history.  Happily, it looks like ‘The Firm’ has learned the painful lessons of Diana’s unhappy tenure as Princess of Wales.  Kate enters royal life much better prepared than Diana was and I think she will find the experience much less of an ordeal.   And, unlike Charles and Diana, it was clear that William and Kate were very much in love.  Their relaxed, easy demeanor stood in stark contrast to the stiff formality of William’s parents on their wedding day.   Hopefully, this is a portent of a long and happy marriage and, come 2071, we’ll be celebrating their diamond anniversary.  🙂

Egyptian expeditions to Chad

This is cool:

http://www.unreportedheritagenews.com/2011/03/ancient-egyptians-made-arduous-trek-to.html

I have to admire someone who could leave the relative comfort of the Nile Valley and go off trekking through the desert.  That takes a lot more guts than I have!

The idea of a correlation between the geography of Chad and the geography of the Underworld as described in the Amduat is intriguing.  I’ve often thought that the distances mentioned were peculiarly specific and this could well explain that.