Grammarly review

Recently, the good folks at Grammarly were kind enough to invite me to review their their product. In case you haven’t heard of it, Grammarly is an online “writing-enhancement platform” that offers proofreading and plagiarism-checking capabilities.

Grammarly is simple to use. You just paste or upload your text and click the review button (though you also have the option of choosing from several different standards of review, including business, technical, and casual). When it has finished its review, your writing is given a numerical score (100 is the best) and then it takes you through the piece line by line to show you where it thinks you goofed.

I spent a great deal of time playing around with Grammarly, and I used samples from many different sources. Unfortunately, I came to the conclusion that I can’t recommend Grammarly since it’s bedeviled by false positives and bizarre suggestions.

Grammarly’s commonly confused words checker is particularly inept. It wanted me to change ‘seat’ to ‘set’ in the following sentence: “The Green Party has given a seat to London Assembly member Jenny Jones….” It also thought that ‘culled’ should be ‘called,’ and ‘polity’ should be ‘policy.’

The spellchecker is similarly dodgy. It flagged ‘unbeliever’ and ‘China’ as misspelled words! I suspect punctuation might have had something to do with it: ‘unbeliever’ was originally in quotes, while ‘China’ originally had an apostrophe and an ‘s’ at the end. But a program that gets confused by basic punctuation doesn’t exactly inspire confidence.

Grammarly’s grammar checker also got tripped up on a number of occasions. It flagged the word ‘have’ in the following sentence: “A total of 30 new peers have been appointed…” Grammarly argued that the subject of the sentence was a singular or uncountable noun and therefore it did not agree with the present tense verb ‘have.’ The original sentence was correct, however. ‘Total’ can take either a plural or a singular verb depending on context: if it’s preceded by ‘the,’ it’s singular; if it’s preceded by ‘a,’ it’s plural. Here endeth the lesson.

Grammarly is not without its benefits, though. Having multiple standards of review is helpful, although I wish that I had more control over what it was looking for. The ‘creative’ standard seemed to work best for fiction, but it’s a barebones evaluation. It doesn’t flag passive voice or sentences that begin with conjunctions, and while those things are arguably less of an issue in creative writing, it would be nice if you could choose to include them in a creative-level review.

Grammarly’s plagiarism checker also seems to work reasonably well. When I used articles that I’ve published online,  each one was flagged because of its similarities with the published version. One cool thing is that Grammarly will compose a citation in each of the standard styles (e.g. MLA, APA, Chicago, etc.) that you can use to cite the work. It’s a rather handy feature if, like me, you hate formatting bibliographies.

Alas, these pluses don’t outweigh the minuses. Wading through a slew of false positives and erroneous suggestions gets old fast. Even when Grammarly got things right, I didn’t find it all that helpful (I don’t need to spend $29.95 a month to find conjunctions at the beginnings of sentences!). Until they fine-tune things, you’re probably better off sticking with MS Word’s spelling and grammar checkers followed by old-fashioned human proofreading.

Diablo 3 Beta: Patch 13

I know some of my readers follow Diablo III, so I thought I’d include a shameless plug for my review of Patch 13 over at the Toonari Post:

Part 1

Part 2

It has all sorts of juicy info about the new skill system (which, incidentally, is really cool, despite what the naysayers say).

In other Diablo-related news, it looks like we may actually have a release date before the sun dies. According to Jay Wilson, we’ll see a release date announcement “in the near future.”  Exciting as this news is, I’m trying not to get my hopes up. After all, Blizzard’s definition of ‘the near future’ may be radically different from that of the man on the Clapham omnibus. 🙂

My top 5 fantasy books

During a moment of boredom, I decided to come up with a list of my five favorite fantasy books.  I’ve adopted a very broad definition of ‘fantasy:’ basically, it’s anything that has some sort of supernatural events in the plot.

(1)  Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell by Susannah Clarke. This is, withouta doubt, one of the best books I’ve read in a very long time.  Clarke does a great job of blending high fantasy with 18th century England.  The world she created is one of the richest fictional worlds I’ve ever encountered.  The historian in me also loves her ability to use real people and events to build her story.

(2)  The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud.  Okay, this isn’t one book, but I’m lumping the three of them together because they’re all great reads.  Like Susannah Clarke, Stroud is quite good at world building and his alternate reality England where magicians rule is quite interesting.  He also takes a risk by telling the story from multiple perspectives and, for the most part, it pays off.  The chapters from Bartimaeus’s perspective are especially fun to read, as the djinn has a fabulously snarky sense of humor.

(3)  The Scroll of Saqqara by Pauline Gedge.  This novel is a retelling of part of the famous Setna cycle of Demotic stories (a reasonably good translation of the original Egyptian text may be found here.)  It is the story of Prince Khaemwaset, who seeks and finds the legendary Book of Thoth, only to suffer the most dire consequences for himself and his family.  Gedge does a great job of staying true to the original source material, while still putting her own mark on the subject.  The twist ending  is one of my all-time favorites.

(4)  Tales of the Dying Earth by Jack Vance.  This is more of a short story collection than a novel, but all the stories are interrelated.  Vance is one of the most technically proficient writers I’ve ever read.  He manages to use advanced and unusual vocabulary without coming across as an over-writing hack like Lovecraft.  Of all the stories in the collection, “Liane the Wayfarer” is probably my favorite.

(5)  War in Heaven by Charles Williams.  This is probably the oddest book on the list.  Ostensibly, the plot revolves around the Holy Grail, but this is worlds away from Indiana Jones.  Much of the novel is devoted to exploring themes of Christian Neoplatonism and, if you can get past the dense, philosophical passages, you’ll find an enjoyable story.  This novel has the most memorable opening line I’ve ever seen: “The telephone bell was ringing wildly, but without result, since there was no one in the room but the corpse.”

What about you: what are your top five fantasy books?